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Open Poetry #29

The Words I Wish To Say

Hockeychick19
Member

since 2002-10-29

Posts 430
Massachusetts, USA

0 posted 2003-10-17 04:25 PM

The words I wish to say I can’t say yet,
You are so patient and kind,
To wait until the day I can call you mine,
I know those three beautiful words you want to hear,
But within me there is a great fear,
I’m glad you understand and will take it slow,
Everyday my feelings for you seem to grow,
Just let me take my time,
And break free of my past,
Because I do want to say those three words to you,
And mean it with all my heart,
I want to be able to say it without hesitation, without worry,
I really want to say those three beautiful words to you.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2003-10-17 05:07 PM

I like this... I also like it that you're waiting to mean them before saying them. *S*

Hockeychick19
Member

since 2002-10-29

Posts 430
Massachusetts, USA

2 posted 2003-10-17 05:29 PM

Thank you suthern :-) I hope my boyfriend likes it too, I wrote this piece with him in mind.

~Kelly~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2003-10-18 12:20 PM

Until then...friendships are nice...James

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

4 posted 2003-10-18 01:07 AM

Sincere and honest. Beautiful.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

James_A_Fraser
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since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

5 posted 2003-10-18 01:13 AM

Be very very careful with those three words, be certain, be sure, and know what you're saying before you say it. They always change things; sometimes it's better, sometimes worse, but never the same after you say them.

~~J

Hockeychick19
Member

since 2002-10-29

Posts 430
Massachusetts, USA

6 posted 2003-10-18 09:27 AM

JamesMichael, friendships always come before love and for me they always will :-)

EvocativeVerse2, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

James_A_Fraser, Thanks for the advice, I'll be sure to keep that in mind.

Thanks everyone :-)

~Kelly~

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