Open Poetry #29 |
in coexistance |
pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
fated in the middle of paused screen a memory melted indispensably i spectator in my skin allowed to stay for i’m empty dispersed of hate and wrath starved to a moan whiteless not invisible repel inspectacle of water a solution of taste and time obsolete amnesia. it is the light that breaks the wave of perfection fish swirling in the premises of air adorable in coexistence yet artificial. the wingless lungless fish. “the grey scale makes painting vertical. Evidently we are dead.” Barrett Watten |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very powerful words here. I liked it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
thx |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Privet pandonov, This deserves more praise then it's recieved. Vivid imagery throughout and an incredibly witty quote..grins excellent work |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Bravo...can't hit you when you wrote this wonderful piece. Well done indeed! This needs to pop back to the top of the page. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
thx all of you, aenimal privet to you too, i never expect many replies, because people don't like to reply to things they don't understand...or fear [This message has been edited by pandonov (10-18-2003 02:26 AM).] |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"i never expect many replies, because people don't like to reply to things they don't understand...or fear" I feel a bit insulted by that statement... however..I am going to reply anyway..lol I enjoyed the piece a lot and hope to see more... Susan |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
do not be, for it wasn't meant in any offensive manner. what a mind creates, are pieces and some of them are irrational to nature [This message has been edited by pandonov (10-18-2003 12:57 PM).] |
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