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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Fingers at Fault  there, the byplays of whimsical words in conceal seek me seek me they seem to cry and my fingers are tapping discontentedly tap…tap…tap… as if the rap, rap, rapping on a desk or as if pen-tip to pad tap, tap, tapping will beckon, [one would reckon] the pull and flinging forth of the solemn sounds inside my head … somewhere, out there an ellipse then plays, marking time time will mark begin of when when will ease a poem’s stretch and this tap, tap, tapping in my head encompassed in the smallest dot dot … tap … rapping away my day faintly fingers finding favor in displaying thoughts to ease allowing continue to be present in the passing of words still to say… … and I find that I am pleased. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(chuckling) oh you are in a mood today aren't you? I believe a bit of the ornery is showing. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"faintly fingers finding favor in displaying thoughts to ease" Oh BOY! This is good!!! I like the picture of the two of you.  |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
yep me too, love the pic.....and yep, aren't we all plagued by the tap tap tap....the lack there of or the need to ....lol...when I haven't written in a long time and I know I need to, I just sit with my fingers on the keyboard and pretty soon tap tap tap the words appear... |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
allowing continue to be present in the passing of words still to say… Yes! An awesome write this one you have tapped. Patricia |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
faintly fingers finding favor ========================== can I borrow your fingers?  loving the ELLIPS and the ALLITS.... tap...tap...tap on ... theres as much chance of me giving up the elips as there is me writing a sonnet. Ornery looks good on ya .  every time I talk to you its over too soon |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Nice, but too much ellipsis. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I knew this would be good just by the title |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Karilea, I loved this...tap tap tapping indeed! |
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