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Rain would laugh 'til cried at my stupidity
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Rain would laugh 'til cried at my stupidity |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Waiting as crisp air turns skin to jewel I would crumble if you came one day to meet eyes paying respects for all you withered Frozen from this autumn~winter yellowed skies do not warm this setting of suns every god believed in turns his head this day fractured clouds sink to eye level and mock wink If i should lay flat to concrete, prisoner, this moth eaten grey of skin would camoflage rain would laugh til cried at my stupidity thinking I could hide from murderous real days, as this |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah... now there is strength of will in these words..even though they describe what feels as if it is defeat. Seasons change my friend and no moth eaten grey are you, simply on this day of rain and clouds, connected more with blue. hugs to you.. and don't forget to take a jacket and a scarf. You need something these days to wrap around you other than the misery, so make them bright... like the soul inside. Yeah. even if you don't think so, it is there. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
I agree with Ron. You're much too beautiful and tender hearted to let this consume you.Wrap yourself up in the tnederest moments of your soul and let it flourish within your heart.For you're a passsionate and loving spirit that deserves the same in return.  Crystal |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Hey .... what's this? The weatherman didn't say anything about overcast skies to the east, where that shining smile go? Thing about storms .... the sun is still shining above the clouds. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write Gemma. Very much enjoyed. ~Smiles & hugs, Nancy~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
powerful Gem.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gah lee wow |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Yea, what Ron said!!!(why does he always say it better?) Gemma, you are wonderful! I am so glad you are here...I love your humor and the way you put those words together... Just thought I would share.. Susan |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Intriging poetry with a bit of sadness going on. kept my attention. Deb  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Gemma, you are one of the most beautiful gals I have ever met....inside, as well as out, and for every drop of rain, you will be made, better for it. Love to you honey...now please put on that lovely smile of yours which is most catching. A wondrous write, my lady Gemma, thank you for sharing. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
gah.... What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall? |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Awwww, Gemma, girl  This one hurts, my friend. We all love you here, sweetie.  Hugs and love to you   Ethel Mae |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
God gem . . this . . just . . aches . . . paying respects for all you withered My God yes . . . damn gem xxoo |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
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