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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
If last night was portend Of beauty to be seen in skies That grow colder with each turn Of this wobbly earth on an axis We draw in our imagination Just as we draw our own faint images To mimic that which would Be beyond mortal capacity to capture Then I am filled with envy For those who see through un-jaded lenses. My own vision being colored red By the sting of cold against skin That would bring blood to my eyes In protest of such uncomfortable climes As the past has written in logs Average temp Precipitation Pressure bars All defined As the warmth I crave continues Decline Still the stars are brighter without such heat As might make comfort And when lightning would streak to win the race For dominance in heaven, Knowing that it nothing to compare to Summer’s cracking storms I am forced to see Even my blurred bias towards this season Is misplaced Perhaps as is my expectation Love should be more than tepid. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
All defined As the warmth I crave continues Decline   JUST what i needed....so it's not just me... ~I wanna live, I wanna give, I've been a miner for a heart of gold~ Neil Young |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I think I'll get one of these for Halloween |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
lol.. Gem.. quit bending over that way!!!! thank you ma'am.. glad you enjoyed.. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Toe... bud drop by the house..I'll pour you a drop of something better for halloween... a real witches brew of spirits... good to see you bud.. hope you are doing well |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Still the stars are brighter without such heat As might make comfort And when lightning would streak to win the race For dominance in heaven, ~*~ tepid? Nay. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Even my blurred bias towards this season Is misplaced Perhaps as is my expectation Love should be more than tepid. Capt. Ron, I completely agree with that last verse.....love should be more than...LOL  Hugs  Ethel |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
We draw in our imagination Just as we draw our own faint images To mimic that which would Be beyond mortal capacity to capture Then I am filled with envy For those who see through un-jaded lenses. perhaps this is why we as mortals put limits on our mental abilities....if we didn't perhaps we'd see things like looking through a microscope magnified 1000 x's more. Meaning the beauty and ability is beyond our conception???? I dunno? But your words are most definately food for thought. Good good morning and thank you for writing and sharing your proverbial thoughts with us once again. Your incredible. smiles and hugs. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Our masks tend to hinder us from some of the simplest things. This was great to read this morning.  Crystal |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
If last night was portend Of beauty to be seen in skies That grow colder with each turn Of this wobbly earth on an axis We draw in our imagination Just as we draw our own faint images To mimic that which would Be beyond mortal capacity to capture Then I am filled with envy For those who see through un-jaded lenses'' ~~~~ I love this opening stanza, it's sets the tone of the poem.....pulls the reader in and the last line...SIGH all of that and more.... HUGSSSS.....  Lauren~ Will the wind ever remember the names it has blown in the past with its crutch, its old age, and its wisdom it whispers no this won't be the last [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (10-17-2003 11:55 AM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ron...This internal weather report is amazing! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i myself wear many different shades, tho rosecolored is the view id like to stay stuck in, cept this world can be such a dastardly place....right at times? anyhow, yes i read you too, and admire yuor poetic vision,tho i dont comment continuously but you make me think too much..... im just a simple girl, barely squeaking out of highschool dont u know? |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes Ron, perhaps love should.... Nicely written. Thanx |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) The stratosphere and barometer are never everything when it comes to the weather, it is beyond all layers and surely the stars are all what those reports are missing! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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