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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought 
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its coming close again to the day October sun sprang through to when i whispered bye to you... and told you it was okay if you left me here alone. The tears that flood my pulsing heart Are steady as I fall apart. Your fragile hand was limp in mine Death rattle was a simple sign. and now your gone, so i'm alone. i've changed my mind, i need you home. Because the day is coming close again And only you Can make me feel okay. - And so it was that time stood still - |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
It's always amazing how poets can create such beauty out of sadness by using unique images and language. I enjoyed the melancholy theme of this piece. Nicely done. Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Alyssa, if this was a personal loss, I am sending you loving hugs. If this was merely poetry, I am still sending you loving hugs for it was beautiful and touched my heart.  Linda |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This touched my heart and am sending you many healing hugs.  Crystal |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
ethome, I don't know how unique my images were... but thankyou. glad you enjoyed... Linda, This was my grandma... my best friend and mother all my life... wrapped in one. Thank you, for the reply, and the hugs... angelblueyes, thank you... good to have a hug and reply... Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Alyssa, you always touch my heart softly enough to break it  love to you |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
this made me really sad, i can only imagine if this really happened to you "For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible." |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Dixie, I live... with a broken heart. And that is life, with every smile, every laugh, and every tear, the heart is broken, and I bleed a little more. If you can actually feel that.. then I'm sorry, because I wouldn't wish it to even he whom I hate. thank youeor, yea bro, it was pretty bad, still is. Makes for easy poetry though... just hard on the heart. Thank you  Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - (blink, breathe, stand, fight) [This message has been edited by GG (10-18-2003 07:44 AM).] |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Alyssa, I am loving how you write... keep posting! Susan |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
:'( Hurtful place to be. Sorry for your pain. Love, Terri~ |
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