Open Poetry #29 |
Where Did I Go Wrong |
the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I thought this love was forever But destiny stepped in And said maybe not How can a love like this So pure and so true Be so wrong What went wrong What changed What happened To this love we had I thought this was forever I thought one day We would be married And together for eternity Now another girl is in the picture Where do I fit in What happened to the love we shared I know what happened It just fizzled out Where did I go wrong Why was my love not enough I don't know And now I don't care Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
You should care. That's a requirement for love. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
I understand completely, at least you found out now instead of later. |
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Kaz Junior Member
since 2003-10-12
Posts 26 |
You might never know what went wrong. Sometimes people just drift apart. |
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Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra |
This made me cry. I don't mean that in a bad way, I could just see myself. And to be honest, even though it upsets me sometimes, I really am grateful every day that things are the way they are now. Today's reminder was a bit harsh, but this made me feel better. Thanks. B "I'm not crazy I'm just a little unwell"~ Matchbox 20 |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
You do care and that'w what make you a wonderful spirit.It's his loss and leaves you open for someone who truly deserves what you've to give. Crystal |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Ah, but you do care, and that is how love is truly going to find you again, whenever that may be! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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