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Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

0 posted 2003-10-15 04:07 PM

I can feel your breath breeze through my hair
and I also feel you standing there
And you're wondering what is going
through my mind...

But because I'm me, and you are you
And because of that I say what's true
I'm the complicated
individual kind...

Yes I give you all my days and nights
And the love inside is yours by rights
But I can't relinquish
every single thought...

And I can't explain how my mind works
For it just has way too many quirks
As the saying goes, what you see here
you've got!

As a writer I do pass some time
Turning thoughts and daydreams into rhyme
Not everything I write
about is true...

What I can't define is put to pen
Just to see if it makes sense,
and then and only then,
I run my thoughts past you...

So, I'm glad you take me as I am
Very glad that you do understand
And I'm grateful for the room
to stretch my mind...

You're the rhythm in my soul, my love
You accept it all, come push to shove
And as it turns out, a poet's mate like you
is hard to find!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~
[This message has been edited by Sunnyone (10-15-2003 04:09 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2003-10-15 04:47 PM

(smiles) Oh Sunnyone, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I dream so much to have a girl who loves and feels from the little girl in her heart with comfort and joy too as in my dreams my girl is poetry to me! (kiss on cheek) Yay, may your Music Maker always recite lullabyes of happiness and love to you, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sunnyone, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2003-10-15 05:44 PM

SunnyOne~
CHERISH HIM ... they ARE hard to find~

Lovely write dear poetess~

Hi 'mate'
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
[email protected]

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

3 posted 2003-10-15 05:46 PM

Wow!  Loved your poem!   Loved your poem!
Loved your poem!   It says it all.
                      Sadelite

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2003-10-15 05:49 PM

Sunnyone

How refreshing and honest and lucky you are!

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

5 posted 2003-10-15 07:06 PM

Very nice.

Love,
Terri~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2003-10-15 08:33 PM

Like the thoughts here...James

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2003-10-15 08:37 PM

What a beautiful love write!

Kaz
Junior Member

since 2003-10-12

Posts 26

8 posted 2003-10-15 11:33 PM

It would be nice to have someone you are able to share your poetic thoughts with. I enjoyed reading this.

Kaz

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

9 posted 2003-10-16 02:05 AM

Hi Noah, and thanks!  With a beautiful heart like yours, I just know that you will find that perfect love to share with!  ~S~

Hi Marge and thanks!  Yes, the man has much patience, and cherish him I will!!  ~S~

Hi Sadelite, and thanks!  So glad you enjoyed this, and came by for a read! ~S~

Hi Martie, and thanks!  I tell myself every single day how lucky I am to have found the perfect soulmate, who understands and accepts a writer's needs...~S~

Hi Terri, and thaks! Was nice to have you here for a visit!  ~S~

Hi James, and thanks!  The thoughts wrote themselves, and it just felt good!  ~S~

Hi Midnitesun, and thanks!  Oh, I appreciate you saying that, as it was written with love for the one that gives me the room to do what I need to do!  ~S~

Hi Kaz, and thanks!  Yes, it is wonderful that there is someone to listen, encourage, and support...even when I hit that poetical bottom! I wish that all my friends will have that love, too...~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~S~

[This message has been edited by Sunnyone (10-16-2003 02:06 AM).]

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

10 posted 2003-10-16 06:05 AM

beautiful penning,,,,

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