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I Would Cry You ...
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I Would Cry You ... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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I Would Cry You ... ~*Marge Tindal*~ Oh, how I would cry you if I felt it could be done Purge you from my memories before the break of new dawn~ The wracking sobs-of-remember serve only to leave me weak ... No strength left to shed you down this tearful cheek~ But, oh if I knew how I would cry you right now Seeking an end to drowning in the knowing of you~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
This is so sadbeautiful.....had to coin a new word for it. The sadness so beautifully told. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, my friend... this aches to the core... a heart such as yours should never know this pain... But in case it's true that a burden shared is a load lightened... these shoulders are here. There is beauty in these tears of heart. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis...Some times there are no words...only a hug, like now. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
"But, oh if I knew how I would cry you right now" I hope you are able to...and I think that maybe you have, and this poem is the tears. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
oh lady, you write for the heartaches of all time with this........sighs and hugs |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
It’s an amazing thing it is. These oceans of tears that we create. For sadness, and for joy. Constantly rolling back and forth like some kind of tidal wave of emotion Sometimes held back, by a seawall of determination Other times, spilling over only to end up In the floods of someone else’s swollen river... It’s true though, that the deluge can wash most everything away... Except for the memories... Blessings Marge, I hope that your horizon is filled with clear skies, Richy [This message has been edited by Richy (10-15-2003 03:31 PM).] |
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allamericanjoe Member
since 2003-10-02
Posts 116Iredell county, NC |
Wow, this poem looks sooo familiar, I think I've been here a time or two. Very well penned my friend. JD "The secret of life is enjoying the passage of time" ~James taylor~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling sister of my soul, this has to be just about the saddest and most beautiful tear you’ve ever shed. I swear I can feel the weight of it on my soul, I feel it, actually feel it falling from your heart. Beautifully written beloved one, and if this isn’t just poetry  here are my arms to hold you until the pain is washed away by the power of loveand forever Mushy   Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing Marge...James |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
I like this Marge. Betty |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
You're making me sob... And I don't mean cry hard, I mean sob. I understand in my own way, And I felt this one... oh I felt it. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
This poem screams beauty! Great work and this is going in my library! ~Jess  "Some of us think holding on makes us strong; but sometimes it is letting go." -Herman Hesse |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Marge, this is beautifully written, but sad. I hope you are alright. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
this touches deep |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: A sad one for sure! Some memories are with us for always! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wow, I love the title and theme of this one Marge. That first verse is a real pull in.... Great stuff! Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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IrishDreamer Member
since 2003-10-18
Posts 55Kansas |
Simply breathtaking, impossible to read this without shedding a tear for you and feeling your pain. Here is hoping a smile is soon back on your face. ~Angie~ |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
 This is heartwrenching, but I know with the release of your tears you'll bring life and happiness into your heart. Crystal |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Just wanting to say a big THANK YOU ALL ... for your thoughts and understanding~ It's a great day to be a poetess~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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