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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-10-15 12:03 PM

This Ink

could I move you
with my words
not a day
goes by that
I am not
stirred in thoughts
I discover these days
there are connections
in joints forgotten
hinging on places
where things bend
and I am
rendered reckless
wondering if you
will find color
here in my
black and white

"wish your room had room for two" John Mayer

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

1 posted 2003-10-15 12:09 PM

Love it! This is perect. Thank-you for letting me see this one.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2003-10-15 12:11 PM

We always do... you move... we find. I look for your name. *S*

[This message has been edited by suthern (10-15-2003 12:11 PM).]

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-10-15 12:11 PM

black and white?

Helen . . .
you are a kaleidoscope . . .
xxoo

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2003-10-18 01:22 PM

hinging on places
where things bend
and I am
rendered reckless

Nice way to push your pen and let the ink spill.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-10-18 01:30 PM

always

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2003-10-18 01:35 PM

Beautiful!

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

7 posted 2003-10-18 04:41 PM

"there are connections
in joints forgotten"

But what's a nice girl like you doin' in a joint like this?

Sorry
Couldn't
stop
myself.

I like this poem very much, and I'd better say so before any more wisecracks show up to spoil the thought!

~~J

alisa
Member

since 2003-08-20

Posts 70
Florida

8 posted 2003-10-18 06:51 PM

you are so right, i love this one....

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

9 posted 2003-10-18 07:09 PM

oh this aches.....

loving sue's reply, so true, you are.

~I wanna live, I wanna give, I've been a miner for a heart of gold~ Neil Young

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