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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2003-10-15 07:29 AM

A Little bit of Puck

Within the joy of wondrous
I fly the ploy mischievous
With puckish wings of desire
I search the byways of admire.

But if you ask, I would deny
My mind and I would not comply
We play a part of duel roll
A separation of control

One a flight within the dark
Across a bridge that is an arc
Into a land of make believe
Of only thought and wish conceive

Withdrawal to a place of leisure
Accented with a stay of pleasure
A salve to sooth the care of wear
A valve to close upon despair

It is a place we all know well
We visit it in nightly dwell.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2003-10-15 07:50 AM

Being a Canuck I opened this immediately thinking "well, isn't great Sy has written a hockey poem", I immediately realized that it was much better than any silly hockey poem and I was being silly trying to be funny about it.

Good work!

Eric

The best teachers have the biggest ears

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2003-10-15 08:04 AM

good write Sey, much enjoyed.

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

3 posted 2003-10-15 08:35 AM

Then we wake up to your Little Bit of Bloomin' Puck... to grace our morning...

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2003-10-15 08:36 AM

ethome,
Enjoyed your comment. LOL

Gentle Spirit,
Thanks for the read and reply.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2003-10-15 08:37 AM

Nan,
Good morning sweetness.

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2003-10-15 08:58 AM

Puck sits your shoulder
with a grin and a lark
today...thank you Sy

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

7 posted 2003-10-15 09:04 AM

An insightful look at the world of dreams my friend..as always, Sy, you give us things to ponder..

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2003-10-15 09:05 AM

"One a flight within the dark
Across a bridge that is an arc
Into a land of make believe
Of only thought and wish conceive"

Beautiful words left for us to read this morn Sy.
But remember, 'A dream is a wish your heart makes.'
Tea's on...I'll pour, you sip and write another dream.

~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

9 posted 2003-10-15 09:18 AM

When I saw the title...I though of Puck from "Real World, San Fransisco" Yikes!!!

But alas it is a poem about one of my favorite subjects...Thank you Sy for reminding me that I need more sleep...

Withdrawal to a place of leisure
Accented with a stay of pleasure
A salve to sooth the care of wear
A valve to close upon despair

It is a place we all know well
We visit it in nightly dwell.

I love those lines and I am saving this and no one can stop me!!!!

Susan

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

10 posted 2003-10-15 09:56 AM

Sunshine
Randy is having fun again.

scorpio
Love your comments.

Nancy,
You pour I'll sip.

Susan,
Your replies are always a pleasure to read.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

11 posted 2003-10-15 12:34 PM

A salve to sooth the care of wear
A valve to close upon despair
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your clever word play and poetic banter always make me smile.