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Open Poetry #29

I sunk your battleship

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2003-09-23 12:36 PM

I warned you once
and I remain
A well of love
and source of pain

As once was said
by drunken head
my love sinks ships
like molten lead

[This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (09-23-2003 12:53 AM).]

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-09-23 12:37 PM

nicely penned,,,

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

2 posted 2003-09-23 12:39 PM

WOW!!!
Crystal

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-09-23 03:25 AM

awesome!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2003-09-23 07:50 PM

Your title made me laugh,
but I'm not laughing now.

Been there, done that!

Good poem Jason~

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2003-09-23 09:12 PM

Thoughts like this stay with me for days! Your writing often does that to me. Enjoyed. Chris

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-09-24 10:47 AM

Jason:
(I disagree)
*smile*
but know the feeling well
xxoo

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