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Open Poetry #29

A Rattle Of Leaves

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2003-10-14 07:25 PM

In a rattle of leaves
you can sense excitement
Mother Nature conceives
a knowing caress sent

the unforgotten breeze

Alluring in colours
that of passion and sin
she removes all of hers
accepting with bare skin

The winter adorns her
with a thick white cover
like insulated fur
such, the seasonal lover

the leaves, we remember

Now, resting for a bit
before sharing once more
silently beneath it
winter's blanketing floor

In a rattle of leaves
you can sense excitement
Mother Nature conceives
as unturned earth is spent

that unforgotten breeze

One's outlook can be another's expression.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2003-10-14 07:40 PM

This is so peaceful.....I love the changing of season, and how it inspires....hugsss and muuwwwaaahhhsss

ME~

Will the wind ever remember
the names it has blown in the past
with its crutch, its old age, and its
wisdom it whispers no this won't be the last

PsychoticBunni
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 162
Mythical Atlantis

2 posted 2003-10-14 07:50 PM

i love the cold, the autumn the winter. u bring my joys to life.

Meg

Meg- And the Texan pushed the Mexican out of the plane and screamed, "Long live the ALAMO!!!!!!!!!"

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

3 posted 2003-10-17 10:33 AM

The winter adorns her
with a thick white cover
like insulated fur
such, the seasonal lover

the leaves, we remember

Craig, .....speechless. Made me look outside at the trees in my garden then, so thankyou.

i agree with lauren, so peaceful and sensual.
straight into my library!

much love m friend

~I wanna live, I wanna give, I've been a miner for a heart of gold~ Neil Young

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

4 posted 2003-10-17 11:09 AM

This is great.

Although winter isn't my favorite season, you've penned it well.I love the way you use mother nature in this.

Crystal

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