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Open Poetry #29

Watching

PsychoticBunni
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 162
Mythical Atlantis

0 posted 2003-10-13 09:19 PM

Watching through a window

Sometimes I need to be free
Away from my responsibilities
I just leave my body
I take my soul
And it’s so hard to see you go
Watching through a window

Yet, I’m still torn apart
From the pain in my heart
I can hardly believe I’m letting you go
Watching through a window

I should have known you didn’t want me
But the rain on the panes makes it hard to see
Now I’m not waiting by the phone
I’ve got to face life on my own
But I don’t know how to, so
I watch through a window

Meg- And the Texan pushed the Mexican out of the plane and screamed, "Long live the ALAMO!!!!!!!!!"

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2003-10-13 09:46 PM

Errr,  did you windex it before or after?

Cute write,  sometimes that is about how it
goes for us,  we end up watching,  and are
kinda stuck there....

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

2 posted 2003-10-13 10:35 PM

sad but sweet poem PsychoticBunni

:-)

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

3 posted 2003-10-14 02:39 AM

this can be really hard, beautiful emotional sincere writing,

pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

4 posted 2003-10-14 03:29 AM

hail to freedom.. or not

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

5 posted 2003-10-14 04:40 AM

I know what you mean....
too well.
Well written, I like it alot.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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