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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

0 posted 2003-10-13 04:38 AM

Mirage of Her

The miles between us with winding
roads crossing open plains and up
many mountains.

Has me in a trance until i feel the
warm breeze touch my face that
feels like your sweet breath.

I reminisce in my mind of loving
passions and see a mirage of you
as my eyes gaze longingly.

A drop of rain touches my face and
lips and i long to feel the wetness
of your lips.

I reach out to hold you with my arms
only to find them holding a mirage of
you.

Remembering that miles get shorter
as hearts get fonder i now can feel
you in my arms.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-10-13 04:45 AM

home is where the heart is

yours is always in the right place

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2003-10-13 08:23 AM

oh how lovely, thoughts and feeling from the soul of admiration. Great write

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2003-10-13 08:37 AM

QjQ
Well done, enjoyed very much.

Nan

Administrator

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

4 posted 2003-10-13 09:20 AM

"Miles get shorter as hearts get fonder..." - Excellent line - and sooo true...

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

5 posted 2003-10-13 09:23 AM

Well done Q!

Susan

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

6 posted 2003-10-13 09:58 AM

So touching this is for me. Lovely!
A

for you, and your love to share! Sweet as can be!!!

Terri~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2003-10-13 10:01 AM

a wonderful mirage, and may the miles disappear for both of you

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2003-10-13 10:14 AM

nice

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

9 posted 2003-10-13 11:18 AM

I reminisce in my mind of loving
passions and see a mirage of you
as my eyes gaze longingly.

A drop of rain touches my face and
lips and i long to feel the wetness
of your lips.

I reach out to hold you with my arms
only to find them holding a mirage of
you.

And I'm suddenly back in the desert of reality, longing for that oasis of memory. *S* This is beautiful, QjQ... very! *S*

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

10 posted 2003-10-13 12:52 PM

hmmmm, miles get shorter as hearts grow fonder. good oonnnnnnnneeeee.

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