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Open Poetry #29

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pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2003-10-13 03:19 AM

horizon of few ticks
is all i wear.
epiphany of
seconds
collecting partially
and leaving less.
the weight of
my stay
is now minus 1.

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

1 posted 2003-10-13 03:38 AM

"epiphany of
seconds"
"the weight of
my stay
is now minus 1"

good stuff...i am sorry i missed you before...i will be looking for you from now on...h

pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

2 posted 2003-10-13 03:45 AM

thx, don't worry sometimes i can't find myself either...

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

3 posted 2003-10-13 03:50 AM

I'm at a loss for words..

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

4 posted 2003-10-13 09:38 AM

Excellent -- I love a short poem with depth and power.

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Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2003-10-13 09:40 AM

I positively enjoyed this negative write

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

6 posted 2003-10-13 01:53 PM

Leave it to midnite to come up with a response like that..lol bravo Kacy!

as for you pandonov you are a most welcome addition to the blue

pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

7 posted 2003-10-13 02:11 PM

thx all, thx aenimal, I dwell here(in the blue) don't forget to say hi, when you pass by

[This message has been edited by pandonov (10-13-2003 02:17 PM).]

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

8 posted 2003-10-13 09:45 PM

Ah - an imbalance to be sure... Well written, pandonov...

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