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Fawn Eyes
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Fawn Eyes |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
In the soft, yellow light of the Sun, little Fawn Eyes peeks out to see where the playful forest spirits are hiding. The spotted fawn by her side stares out at the filtering light spreading through the trees. She giggles at the touch of the fawn's nose and crinkles up her brown, doe-eyes. She taps the slender trunk of a white birch, and zig-zags through the bushes playing a frolicking game of tag with friendly, tree spirits. She can see what many cannot see. And, she basks in the love and the protection of the many spirits of the forest. Her dark, brown hair framing a beige face. Childish joy, the beauty that shields her from any sadness. She only knows the pure delight of being with her forest friends or with the little, spotted fawn who trails behind her...with eyes of love. [This message has been edited by Ivy Rose (10-12-2003 01:31 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very beautiful, Ivy... Such a tranquil and enjoyable scene... The title caught me right from the start... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
OH, I really enjoyed this piece of forest fun! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sweet, soft, almost surreal. I love the purity and innocence of this write.  Happy Autumn! Linda |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ivy, this is so adorable!! Like Barry, the title caught my eye. I love animals. Deer are beautiful creatures to me. I love to watch them running. It's about the time of year for them to start coming out of the woods around here. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How very lovely.. I am a lover of fawns..and all God's creatures. This is a real keeper....thank you for sharing it here with us. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Ivy, this is absolutely gorgeous, sweet friend, this reminded me so much of Bambi, one of my favorite Disney movies ever! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is so innocent and adorable, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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