Open Poetry #29 |
As life and days go on. |
Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
AS LIFE AND DAYS GO ON There’s so much that within we see That contemplation can set free For now its warmth does comfort me Although the cloud and grey Within the mind of truth and dream In sight of time of now and seen To what can be and what has been Decisions made in day Voices that I so well know That on and on and on do go Which help me on when I get low Within the mind so full I may listen, or may not Try again or lose the plot Realise just how much I’ve got And call myself the fool Life does seem a rolling wheel That rolls upon all that we feel And we may question what’s the deal As life as days go on To realise as we slowly grow That everything we’ll never know That days will come and days will go As life and days go on |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Life does seem a rolling wheel That rolls upon all that we feel And we may question what’s the deal As life as days go on it seems that you and I are on the same page here good to read you once again. I have missed your words of wisdom. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Dixie, nice to see you here again my friend, thanks for the reply, each one means a lot to me. I contemplate maybe too often and not too often on the bright side of life, but I am trying harder and harder to. Hope all is well with you, again thanks and see you soon. Sincerely Rick |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Always, always listen to the voices, Rick... never let them go. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rick You have plenty of company. LOL Enjoyed |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Sunshine, I shall, thank you for the reply, as always, very much appreciated. Sincerely Rick |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Seymour, great to see you here, thank you for your reply. Always look forward to your company. Take care my friend till again. Sincerely Rick |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
You know I had the very strong mental picture of a big wheel, like one of those you see in scenic pictures, with the pond. As I read, the flow of the words matched the movement of the wheel, and I enjoyed the experience!! Great writing, and I see I shall learn much from you!! ~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~ |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Finally, I have made it to you. A rolling wheel indeed...but I keep hitting bumps. My PC kicked me out four times before I could get to you! Beautifully written, Rick. Your rhyme and flow are just lovely. Patricia |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Sunnyone, may we both learn together, thank you so much for your reply, very much appreciated, thank you. Dear Patricia, great to see you here, thank you for your wonderful reply, great to have good friends here. To you both, thank you again for your replies, my family at Passions is fantastic. Sincerely Rick |
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