wind captured dreams(using the nanni poetry form)

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wind captured dreams(using the nanni poetry form)

kaleanna
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0 posted 2003-10-11 07:43 PM

wind captured dreams
(using the nanni poetry form)

for the wind captured the dreams
sailing them on silent wings
flying them to my heart
where dreams do come true

(written Oct 5, 2003)
Meesh

Margherita
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1 posted 2003-10-11 07:46 PM

Lovely! Yes keep the dreams in your heart and they will manifest.
Love, Margherita

Marty Baird
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2 posted 2003-10-11 09:00 PM

I don't know much about nanni poetry form. However I enjoyed your work

Nan

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3 posted 2003-10-13 09:31 PM

Your poem is very nice - Perhaps you could expound upon the "nanni" format for us?

SharaRose
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4 posted 2003-10-13 09:36 PM

Very nice!

Love,
Terri~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Midnitesun

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5 posted 2003-10-13 09:46 PM

I enjoyed this refreshing breeze.
as per the 'nanni' comment,
are you referring to the style of Italian poet Nanni Balestrini?

Alwye

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6 posted 2003-10-13 10:35 PM

oooh....this is so light and lovely....simply beautiful. Keep up the excellent poetry.

~*Krista Lee Knutson*~

We are, each of us angels with only one wing; and we can only fly by embracing one another.
--Luciano De Crescenzo

kaleanna
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7 posted 2003-10-14 12:00 PM

to expand on the nanni poetry form:

here is what i came up with in my research:

Nanni: means an expression of one and all. Its one of Indian's most popular Telugu poems. It consists of 4 lines. The lines total must be between 20 & 25 syllables. Teh poem is not bound to a particular subject.

Meesh

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