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Chlorophyll |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 Chlorophyll By: Noah Eaton 10/9/03 W h o o s h . . . G l i d i n g through... ...Damascus... in negative film... . . . . . . Who is this beggar, who is, s h a k i n g your tree... begging for release... . . . . ...when oxygen just isn't enough... . . . . ...to breathe... Just waiting for your call... . . . ...when you feel better... . . . Yanking out too many cuspids... . . ...without easing the toothache... . . . Hinting the damascening... . . . I recognize your daltonism, . . technicolor photoreceptor... . . . ...and beneath the marigold towel, . . . ...a dangling participle hooks my lip... . . . . . . higher road? . the . on . stay . and . try . we Can . . . Can we d a m p off without d a m p i n g off? . . . . . . F l y i n g through the wind... . . . . . it's always you who comes to mind... . . . . R n i g u n n through the ' s ' u n s h i n ' e ' ...there's a sign... . . . . . Swimming in dal segno... . . . for the twentieth time... . . . . I still don't understand... . this composition... . . . . . . . I scented your blanket, . . . ...wishing I could remember... . . . . the perfume of your memory... . . . . . ...now it's all gone, . . . . ...it's all gone... . . . . . Still I believe... . . . . . . ...it's still magnesium you breathe... . . . . ...but now you're cotangent... . . . . ...to the moon... . . . . . . . . . higher road? . the . on . stay . and . try . we Can . . . Can we d a m p off without d a m p i n g off? . . . . . . F l y i n g through the wind... . . . . . it's always you who comes to mind... . . . . R n i g u n n through the ' s ' u n s h i n ' e ' ...there's a sign... . . . . . Swimming in dal segno... . . . for the twentieth time... . . . . I still don't understand... . this composition... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . N o w I c a n f e e l . . . . . . . . . this grace... . . . . under . . . . i e f r . . . N o w I c a n f e e l . . . . . . . . . this grace... . . . . under . . . . i e f r . . . . N o w I c a n f e e l . . . . . . . . . this grace... . . . . under . . . . i e f r . . . . . . . . Grace... above... . up . . from . . gift . . a . is . . Wisdom cries, and so does the Dallis grass... . . . . . ...when you fear something... . . . . ...other than the Lord himself... . . . . . Faith is still a beautiful thing... . . . . ...it can bring you to heaven, . . . . . ...and a great... . . . . f a i t h . . . . will bring heaven, to your soul... . . . . . . ...Bleed your hemoglobin, Chlorophyll... . . . . . ...bleed for me, Chlorophyll... . . . . . . . . . . higher road? . the . on . stay . and . try . we Can . . . Can we d a m p off without d a m p i n g off? . . . . . . F l y i n g through the wind... . . . . . it's always you who comes to mind... . . . . R n i g u n n through the ' s ' u n s h i n ' e ' ...there's a sign... . . . . . Swimming in dal segno... . . . for the twentieth time... . . . . I still don't understand... . this composition... . . . . . . . . P . U . . E . K . A W . . . ...all you sleeping beauties... . . . . . . P . U . . E . K . A W . . . ...all you sleeping beauties... . . . . . . P . U . . E . K . A W . . . ...all you sleeping beauties... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . w h o o s h . . . . . . w h o o s h . . . . . . .  I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth I can see the sun set and I perceive ***Live*** [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-11-2003 01:50 PM).] |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
Awesome, Noah! Had my head swimming right along with you! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, It reads like the ark on an angry sea, enjoyed. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Noah, I love this!!!! AAALLLLLLL of it, and the way you di this is awesome!! higher road? . the . on . stay . and . try . we Can . . . Can we d a m p off without d a m p i n g off? . . Beautiful writing, my friend.  Hugs  Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oooops-sy-daisy.... I forgot to tell you that I've got Twisteds graphic working on my poem now. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You're a good man, Noah....and a stunningly powerful poet. A grand salute for this one! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
WOW! Noah this is one very interesting and swirling piece of poetry. I had to read it several time to get the full gist of it. Great job!!! H U G S, Marti |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Noah, I always knew you had a gift, that you had a lot of ability... thanx for proving me correct... Excellent piece, very well done. |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Oh my Noah... Breathless!!!!!!! You truly are blessed by God. What a gift you have, and how blessed I feel when I get to partake. Just lovely!!! The girl that finally steals your heart will be the blessed one! Thank you so much for sharing yourself with all of us!!! What a beautifdul thing I just experienced by reading this! Love, Terri~  Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Noah...this had it's own pulse...I could feel it beating as I read ...You're pretty amazing! |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
fabulous and excellent penning,,, |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i could hear the aching of the green losing its color very powerful |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Somewhat like concrete poetry, yet far more visual then most....very refreshing and enjoyable......love it.....ice |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Oh Noah, this was ttruly amazing.I could feel the heartbeat of this as I read each word.You care so much about everything and it always shows in your heart.You are truly blessed and so will whomever you choose to spend your life with.We all love you so much. May joy and happiness always go with you.  Crystal |
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Shawna Fitzgerald Junior Member
since 2003-10-09
Posts 11 |
noah, this was wondreful hope to read more from you, e-mail me if you want at candy_man142003@yahoo.com love shawna |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
noah, this seems different for you, but I really love it..it remindds me of this song...but thanks, Noah What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall? |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I was twirled and swirled and lifted and lowered and around and around I went--lost in your wondrously innovative, creative and ever-so lively words and presentation!  Loveya, Angel Boy! EA |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
quite creative in your presentation. Enjoyed the write Noah. TD |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Woah... its hard to leave me speechless... You did. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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