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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence 
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i drag the seconds hand not to waste my hate enmeshed in resemble tedium. ennui stone unaware of its simplicity. [This message has been edited by pandonov (10-11-2003 11:52 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Pandonov, I like what you are trying to say, but become distracted by the spelling errors. I think if you took a bit of time and care with your spelling, you would gain more readers. In a long prose piece or even an epical poem, a misspelling or two may occur, and generally we get so engrossed in reading, we might overlook them. But in short, concise pieces such as this, they stand out. When you are posting your work, Ron has put a dictionary.com up in the right hand corner for your assistance, if you ever question a word. Other poets, myself for example, are willing to help, too... Looking forward to your other poems. Sunshine |
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Insomniac Cat Member
since 2003-09-23
Posts 69The Land of the Dadaists |
Besides the spelling errors, I liked this poem; its hazy and surreal, my kind of poem! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Well penned indeed...  |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
sry all for the spelling errors, i was... well too much wine, let say, that night(morning), didn't even notice some letters misplaced. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
By clicking on the blue and white notepad icon, pandonov, you can revised your post within 24 hours of posting it. You are not allowed to repost the same poem, even if revised, in the same forum. In a moment, I will be removing your second post. Please check your e-mail. Thanks! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nicely done! ~Hugs~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you Petre! Much better! |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
thx sunshine for the email sry for doing it twice, didn't know |
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