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Doni Tonda
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Doni Tonda |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Doni Tondo Designating the notion wide range of prize Expanded to include meditation’s mind Designing this pilgrimage, purely visible and spent Singles out all praise dripping realms originally meant Plethora so accessible and sweetly mirrored In this summit of poetic circles Lies a vernacular tradition with generic formations Extraordinary coherent mortars written in the sky Clearly painted images of our faithful family’s mind Wouldn’t it be we that are pages of reproduction? Our images of history are thumbnails so gingerly cushioned There is separation of light and dark Creation of plants, moon and sun Of sea monsters, and the parishioners of water First worldly gentleman and woman in all records of Renaissance Art on the walls, waxed by candles floating to yesterday’s call Locating a source of fire in music and show business Clearly flammable, soundproofing all souls countless Inspectors and performers, making all earth whole Memoirs of ambition, thoughts of passionate sons Poor old fires, which were beautiful once From ever fountain raises metaphorical glows Painted for all to see, clearly exposed Like a Play in a stadium with shooting sparks to the sky All within a night-club memorial lamenting 70 feet high |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I enjoyed this read. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(smiling) sometimes...my mind simply refuses to wrap itself around all you are saying..so I have to visit more than once..and work my way through the images and references... but you always weave a complex set of images around a point that illuminates aspects worth the peer... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ditto and in triplicate to what Ron said... If only I had that vocabulary.....Imagine what I could do... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ I was about to say the same thing. LOL Enjoyed |
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