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Open Poetry #29

Wishing

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2003-10-10 02:48 PM

Are you wishing for soft times in fields of flowers
Gentle breezes that through the autumn trees towers,
Are you longing for a blanket thrown on the grass
Where two can sit and sip wine while the world goes pass,
Would you like the warm sunshine on your hair and face;
I am wishing it was real outside of my mind
Where we could relax outside the constraints of time.

Gloom

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

1 posted 2003-10-10 02:52 PM

This sounds like the love of your life is your safe place...your haven in life. What a beautiful thing to read. Just lovely!!! A kiss for you and your lovely.

Terri~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2003-10-10 02:56 PM

beautifully written...thank you

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

3 posted 2003-10-10 02:57 PM

This is beautiful.My wish is that you have this and so much more.I missed reading you while away.

Crystal

Endlessecho
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since 2003-09-05

Posts 398
I live within myself

4 posted 2003-10-10 02:59 PM

I certainly do wish for all of that! You make me want to be in this poem. How beautiful!

pandonov
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since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

5 posted 2003-10-10 03:04 PM

u really know what to wish and how

Lotus Breeze
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since 2003-09-06

Posts 112

6 posted 2003-10-10 08:07 PM

Beautiful poem like your heart, I will go there anytime with you

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

7 posted 2003-10-11 04:08 PM

Isn't this the simple fantasy of many?
Loved the way you used soft sounds of s and z...very relaxing.  Beautiful imagery.

I'll be looking forward to re-reading this and your new postings.
            Smiling,
              Sadelite

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