»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #29
»
The Fighting temptations
| Open Poetry #29 |
|
The Fighting temptations |
|
|
GhostWriter_6 Member
since 2001-09-03
Posts 237??Amityville?? 
|
everyday i wake up with visions of fast money and street dreams smoke and mirrors gleam.. but reflections arent always what they seem my appearance is non-chalant a calm demeanor havent learned my lesson since they dropped my 9 felonies to misdemeanors life itself has me on a different though process the more i work is like shoe stores im payless tired of always saying i cant afford certain objects seeing affordable housing ... only being in the projects whats next written text about how im always vexed or suicide notes rope and ducktape around eyes and necks i can handle my situation.. but anticipation for the good life has me on the grind tunnel vision in perspective.. living life..the blind leading the blind a kleptomaniac who reacts on impact i attack helpless foes just to get some payback knowing that karma brings it all back never sold crack but ive sold drugs from prozac to 20 sacks .. but it makes ends meet... keeps shoes on my sons feet growing kids gotta eat so why should i care who i cheat if it gains me one step up the success ladder the way i feel inside my conscience tells me it doesnt matter corrupted since 18 ive planned schemes to obtain green never caring who i hurt or involve inbetween cheated fiends and teens only to end up in the back of cop cars with blue lights and sirens ive ran this criminal life of mine like an obstacle course but what you do to others comes back and ive proven to be the main source watching life events like dates for court child support and divorce makes my hunger worse i put family first scared to death to see the psychiatrics they willl lable me as a drug addict.. judging my book by its cover is automatic clinging to all my bad habit like static theres no pill or class that can help me surpass the criminal tactics |
||
| © Copyright 2003 Antonio Marquis Bankhead - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
WOW!!This is dark, deep, and very profound.Whomever this person is I hope they realize that they can turn things around.A class, a pill, or even a friend won't do it for them.These things only support.This person needs to feel inside their ready for the change to make their life better.Although this was somewhat dark and things I wish weren't going on I still enjoyed the read.You write about contreversial things and sometimes that's not seen.Well penned. Crystal |
||
|
pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
uf heavy, but most interesting, you're rights , shrinks won't help but maybe poetry does it for you |
||
|
GhostWriter_6 Member
since 2001-09-03
Posts 237??Amityville?? |
thanx for the feedback everyone.. greatly appreciate it |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
