Open Poetry #29 |
Let The Rain Fall |
the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I want the pain To go away I want tne good things To come back to me I want to remember The best things in life And not all The bad things Let the rain fall And cleanse me Of all this hurt And replace it with love Cold hands means a warm heart |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Yes I wish for you all this. May the rain come and wash away All the pain in your hearts way May it flow out of your soul So that happiness may take control May the hurt be gone with a wave of my wand And nothing but love will flourish strong For you see you are tender and sweet Bathed in love from your head to you feet The angels will help to let you out And I'm here if there's ever any doubt That you are a lady full of life and love And you deserve all that I've mentioned of Crystal |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This one is simple, and it tugs the heartstrings. This is well-written, and deserves more attention than it has gotten. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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PsychoticBunni Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 162Mythical Atlantis |
yea i know alot of us that need to be cleansed. i think of it almost every time i come in from football w/ my brothers. but all jokes aside i think everyone can relate to this. Meg- And the Texan pushed the Mexican out of the plane and screamed, "Long live the ALAMO!!!!!!!!!" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) I send many angel hugs your way, dearest friend, know that through every storm, a lighthouse is beaming, and is signaling you! (sigh) Know we're all here, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
I know the feeling. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I wish it all upon you, my friend, immediately upon your awakening in the morning, or in your dreams tonight...at least, as I don't think my geni powers have been functioning well as of late. enjoyed... jwesley |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
I like this. It's so true. We all deserve good things in life!!! Terri~ Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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