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Thyme (with Liz)
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Thyme (with Liz) |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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Tips of ring a circle spared between the trees an autumn breeze like touch of hand from breath to neck I stirred in flowing cotton gown . . . Do not mistake the look upon my face when lifted up to the light- the nostalgia hidden in white plain as the ground I stand on I feel the circle closing around me Leaves, drifting from tree and branch of thyme shards of confetti, remnants of life fall upon my lashes, reminding me for what once was and will never be again The burning has awakened the air around me growing stale . . . The taste that smolders on my tongue- I remember the burn the crumbling remnants of stone I’ve refused to wake for far to long My dream becomes reality the nightmare trapped in time |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
The taste that smolders on my tongue- I remember the burn the crumbling remnants of stone I’ve refused to wake for far to long ohhhh ladies, this is wonderful divine writing...I can feel so many emotions in this write whispering acrossed my soul.. very enjoyed you two! |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
wow! you two are quite the match! a wonderful blend of talent. [This message has been edited by Edder (10-10-2003 01:56 PM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
what? no parsley sage or romemary???  a talented write my friends...and a beautiful blend of words.. Bravo!! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I loved the feeling of this wonderful poem!  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Thyme-less!  You du-et very well, Little Windy Wings!  & Linda |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
A wonderful weaving of words, my little friends. This is really good, Sue and Liz.....very good!!  Heart hugs and love to you both  Ethel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent Sue and Liz!! Bravo to two of Passions finest poets! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Wow ladies, this flutters and swirls and dances ever so gracefully across the page. Kudos you two~ |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
thank you all very much. sue you were fun even when I slacked off...hehe What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Well done to both of you. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Goodness! I hope that this was as effortless to do as it is to read. Well done Ladies! Very, very nice |
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Endlessecho Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398I live within myself |
Wow! To both of you - this flowed so nicely. So full of emotion and images. Just wonderful! |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This is absolutely wonderful  You two mesh well and it shows here.Crystal |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I'll drink to that. |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Wonderful job ladies. Love it! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
 this was wonderfully enriching and well, simply put..your both terrific....thank you for the lovely read |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
This was delectable! A delightful mix of words... Seasoned with all the right spices of life... A sweet offering, to savor always... Thanks for the treat Sue and Liz! This really hit the spot! Richy |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A most wonderful weave, Well Done Sue and Liz. Maree  fate is not just |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Sue and Liz, this is beautiful, sweet friend, everything has a special taste, and each seaosn brings a whole new rendition of it with crushed, pinched memory! (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You Both, sweet friends, I love this, we all love you both so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Liz and Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
What a mix great write ladies |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
We could expect nothing less from you two than something so beautiful. Thank you, I really enjoyed this... “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson [This message has been edited by El_Campeador (10-11-2003 09:09 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
BRAVA! I do believe I can tell who wrote what, but in that it is a duet, you two still blended the thoughts of two halves into one whole...Wonderful Job! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I likey!!! You two look good together... Susan |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you Donna - love to see you reading me.us *smile* Hey Ed - *smile* thank you You know Ron, I was going to name it Parsley but I didnt think it would quite fit the mysticism of the whole write *smile* thank you Thank you Martie, from you this means a whole lot ahaha Linda - I love your reply and my new name there thank you ahh Ethel we are your little friend arent we, LittleOne and littlefriend . . *smile* thank you Two of the finest Oh My Nancy - maybe amongt thousands *smile* but thank you Hey Bluesy - thank you wanted that free swirling kinda thang, ya know? Liz. m'dear - you were so easy to write with . . I loved it - such a free spirit - I wish I had that when I was your age, please dont ever let it go, it makes you very special indeed and thank you for writing with me - you never slacked off silly thing . . . *smile* I have written with one of the finest poets here! Thank you Liz, truly xxoo Hey Sy - thank you soo much Ed, baby - it was! Liz is an awesome person to write with and thank you Hey echo - thank you so very much Crystal, very cool - am glad this flows as you see it thank you Mikey *smile* thank you uhhh can you drink one for me too? Evocative - thank you so much Thank you Lee for reading . . . and such a nice response Hey Richy - thank you . . . well seasoned ahah that was good Thank you Maree  Noah yes, each new turn . . to everything . . turn turn turn . . . *smile* thank you Thank you Raph, so I see the govt has found you finally was telling Liz you have been MIA . . . *smile* Ben, that was so sweet - thank you Kari - thank you so much - damn was hoping no one can tell - but uhh cant hide form the Sun now can we? *smile* Susan, me likey too . . . *smile* thank you Thanks everyone was a pleasure to write with Liz, she has many gifts . . . I am the honored one truly xxoo |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
in the time it took to read this thyme, the spices of LIFE bloomed again to offer the sweetest scents in a great blending of two fine poets and I have received a newly created, unique spice for my shelf thanks, to both of you! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very nicely expressed collaboration, well done to you both!! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you Kacy so much what a beautiful response! Hey Barry - that means a lot to me *smile* thank you Thanks guys xxoo |
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