Open Poetry #29 |
All, Gone... |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
That deserted feel… ~ Dust blowing across the sands ~ …Bereft of lexis |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
NO!!!!!!!!! I won't stand for it!! Morning Sunshine... |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Morning lady.... gone? no.. simply in repose perhaps... like this... and the strength as well as the emotions in so few words... this..this is real... |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
This is a beautiful painting with words, Karilea. Thank you... “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
hugsss lady sun... Lauren~ There's a song inside my soul |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely....very nicely done...love this! ~Hugs YOU!~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
gone... I think not lovely lady! The sun will always withstand the deserts sands.... no matter how bad the sandstorms!! HUGS YOU |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
good,
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
The only way you, or anything that is your own will go anywhere...is over our dead and cooling bodies.... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) .....and even when the desert winds keep blowing and the heat is unbearable and phlegmatic, nothing ever is abandoned and dust to dust, ashes to ashes, he spirits are always there! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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