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Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-10-10 06:48 AM

I'm living in a shattered wolrd.
Where everything is distorted and confused.
Like broken glass,
It will never be the same.
It shall never be the safe haven it once was.
And it's starting
To take it's toll on me.
I'm holding a single dying rose
As I take off this smiling mask,
And reveal the hidden tears,
That I've kept so seretely.
The words still echoing through my head,
Back and forth they race between my thoughts.
I've built my fortress all around me,
And now there's no one...
Left to break me...

"I'm tired of being what you want me to be."~Linkin Park

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2003-10-10 08:40 AM

I know how this feels, to build those walls and make a safe haven.....very touching piece...

Lauren~

There's a song inside my soul
One that I've tried to write over and over again

Endlessecho
Member

since 2003-09-05

Posts 398
I live within myself

2 posted 2003-10-10 08:44 AM

Yes. I agree. This was touching and very real. It's scary taking down those walls.

Hope all goes well.

Well done..

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2003-10-10 08:46 AM

sometimes little one, the walls are good...but remember...there is a time for the walls to come down also.
Love ya gal...
I don't have a clue why you remind me so much of me at your age ....

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-10-10 09:00 AM

Ah...no one left
to break you.

How insightful. So we build again,
we become stronger, taller,
straighter, leaner, even...nicer...

and with that power
comes wisdom.

You are on the cusp of knowledge.
Your cup is about to overflow...
sip well, and often...

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2003-10-10 09:03 AM

Listen to Sunshine Stac....
in the cup of knowledge that you drink from, her words will blend into the mix along with so many others here so very well....
all you need to do is drink....listen...
learn....and be the beautiful person I know you to be....

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