Open Poetry #29 |
You'll see her here |
allamericanjoe Member
since 2003-10-02
Posts 116Iredell county, NC |
You'll see her here, From time to time. In the written word, My verse, my rhyme. I speak of her, More oft' than not. My heart you see, On a string she's got. I'll describe her to you, So that you'll unerstand. The beauty she posseses, It's where my love began. Beautiful brown eyes, Like those of a dove. It was her eyes that bespelled me, And captured my love. Her hair is like silk, A chocolate cascade. From it her sweet smell, my senses invade. Her lips thin and soft, Some of heaven is there, For when they touch mine I know no dispair. Her hands oh so gentle, nails the colour of wine. my problems don't matter, when our two entwine. No more can I tell you, No more can you see. For the rest of her visage, I keep only for me. "The secret of life is enjoying the passage of time" ~James taylor~ |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
She sounds beautiful, just like your poetry! Thanks for sharing~ARH |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Smiling at this love poem. Hope she reads it. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
this was so sweet and loving over every line I can relate , someone special is usually threaded through mine Hope |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
I'm glad you have that someone special in your life.May she see this wondrous write and know ho seh touches your heart and soul. Crystal |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, that was so lovely--and I loved the precious ending! Warm hugs, Earth Angel |
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SongVixen Junior Member
since 2003-07-06
Posts 43England |
Lucky lady! ~ hope she inspires more of your poetry~ ~*NATASHA*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How beautiful this is... and what a lucky lady to have inspired such a wonderful piece! Well done poet sir. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
But...you have given us enough for us to acknowledge how blessed you are. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
allamericanjoe Lovely thoughts, lovely write, lovely read. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
What a beautiful 'peace' you have....so inspiring.... Lauren~ There's a song inside my soul |
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