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Leftover Wine |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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they fall like orphans from their whore mother disheveled and delirious reckless and free anarchists in the blank stone sky they come in abundance flying like dollar bills in the air over summers raped fields that just beg for cover they taunt even as they burn like witches at the stake poked and prodded shoved in black plastic bags you can still hear them crackling like a rekinded fire surprise surprise they are back and forth and back and forth they haunt me in obsession of their plight revolutionaries, vagabonds, i feel their soul as they deliver the message of the gospel maybe they've come to save me? [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (10-10-2003 11:15 AM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
wow!!! what a write,, I enjoyed reading,,, |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
quite impressive. enjoyed it. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Quite powerful emotions poured forth... Brought chills. TD |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
You are tops on this board. Your stuff is terrific! And at least appreciated by me. Dont know why you dont get more replies. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Michelle, this made me think of the scuppernong vines that are dying. Gary's Dad has like an orchard of them. They look sad when they start dying. Enjoyed reading this.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Insomniac Cat Member
since 2003-09-23
Posts 69The Land of the Dadaists |
enjoyed. has a pensive quality. great beginning! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very powerful write, yes...yes it is. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) This too reminded me of vines, those growing all along the marble walls of my university I go to in Boulder, which are now auburn red! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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