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Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2003-10-09 11:55 AM

This thread
that looks frayed
                 dangles
at
the

edge
        [..........]

in hem of raw
        un
finished cloth
                we wove
on a loom of words
with tightly spun
                 believe
the
T
H
R
E
A
D

that looks frayed now
and dangles

Begging
               come undone

What camel passed through
the needles eye?

For I am still
      in want of you

forever in the need
to dream
                      it might
be so

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

1 posted 2003-10-09 11:58 AM

For I am still
in want of you

yeah pretty much....

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2003-10-09 11:59 AM

come here and hug me girl... you may not be in want of me....but hey..I'll take a hug anytime..

Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

3 posted 2003-10-09 12:00 PM

lol no no my reply was totally misconstruded right??!! I was having a moment with that line..I was thinking of something

I'm flustered right now lol

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (10-09-2003 12:02 PM).]

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2003-10-09 12:01 PM

LMAO....

oh?? you mean yu aren't inwant of me??? oh NO!!!!

now I am crushed......

( walks off sobbing...)

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

5 posted 2003-10-09 12:04 PM

Loved the words I read in this...thread.

Jason

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2003-10-09 12:13 PM

tattered thoughts
frayed hems
a needle
that could bring
the weft
to the woof...

a gentle weave, m'friend...

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

7 posted 2003-10-09 12:16 PM

Thank you Jason...

Sunshine...
gentle weave? or just a loose thread begging pulled?

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2003-10-09 12:16 PM

in hem of raw
        un
finished cloth
                we wove
on a loom of words
with tightly spun
                 believe

Love how your mind works Cpat, Ron~
OH yes!!

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

9 posted 2003-10-09 12:18 PM

Blues... my mind works??????? OH lordy..I thought that had stopped eons ago...

Endlessecho
Member

since 2003-09-05

Posts 398
I live within myself

10 posted 2003-10-09 12:25 PM

Keeping it from coming updone. It takes constant work. Words and poetry help.

Beautifully written.

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

11 posted 2003-10-09 12:26 PM

endlessecho...thank you for the words..and taking time to read.. both are appreciated.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

12 posted 2003-10-09 12:33 PM

Gee...how my mind works when I read you.

Wonderful piece here Ron..love the presentation as well.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

13 posted 2003-10-09 02:12 PM

Thank you Nancy... glad you enjoyed..

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

14 posted 2003-10-09 04:25 PM

What camel passed through
the needles eye?

.....

you don't mean the cigarettes, do you?

......

jokes apart...

this is a fascinating write, my friend

regards
sudhir

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

15 posted 2003-10-09 04:29 PM

lol... no, I gave up Camels some time back and switched to something milder...

although.... smoke through the eye of a needle is an interesting image to build on...
hmmmm.......

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

16 posted 2003-10-09 04:30 PM

I love the way you wrote this Capt. Ron...
with your thread dangling...LOL

Hugs

Ethel

Cpat Hair

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Posts 11793

17 posted 2003-10-09 04:31 PM

lo... now ethel..you'll make me blush!!!

[This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (10-09-2003 04:31 PM).]

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

18 posted 2003-10-09 04:45 PM

Very interesting piece...makes my mind wander...

and that is just not a safe thing.

Susan

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

19 posted 2003-10-09 06:04 PM

Very clever formatting, Ron!

Hope all is well.

Corinne

Edder
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since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

20 posted 2003-10-09 06:07 PM

No one does it like you, Capt!

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

21 posted 2003-10-09 06:18 PM

To tug the loose thread and come undone at the seam or leave it to chance, perchance to dream?

Hmmm...you made me think about things left undone...better left undone, me thinks!

Hey bud, you know you make me think even when my brain hurts.

Patricia

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

22 posted 2003-10-09 10:12 PM

LOL @ Patricia...he has a way of doing that, even when it hurts.
I'm not thinking and you can't make me!!

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

23 posted 2003-10-09 10:54 PM

For I am still
      in want of you

forever in the need
to dream
                      it might
be so

~Sigh~   WOW...

Lauren~

There's a song inside my soul
One that I've tried to write over and over again

pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

24 posted 2003-10-09 11:42 PM

do you read language poetry. kinda reminds me of it. enjoyed it

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

25 posted 2003-10-10 12:15 PM

I knew I needed another sewing class.
I'm nearly threadbare. Any suggestions?
Are dangling threads and needles anything like dangling participles????

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