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To Be ...Scene
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To Be ...Scene |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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"To Be" Scene Edge-sensed today, I lay here stretching to the sun, thoughts dancing in the light feeling youthful, and not questioning why. I have no doubts to these feelings silken threaded, bound by trust, knotted in all the right places, pauses where needed, to catch the breath, slowing it down, to time it with yours. No longer anxious, nor standing under the miss...allowing the flow of my day to take me through each start of new, leaving addictions behind, worries with Alice, and putting on a face of thought, naked for all to see. I walk in happy steps today, comfort of another, near enough to lift and share the burden, condition me in ease, leaving more of me for more of you...long in coming. I am a painted lady today, rainbowed and in the pink, Victorian in style, just the way I "wish to be scene". M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Lady no matter the "scene" of your heart, you're always perceievd as beautiful and inspiring.This truly touched me for the way you used the words and painted the picture was so vivid to me.Good morning and may the day bring you sweet blessings.  Crystal |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hi Crystal...My mother is in town...so my day is planned for a pleasant visit with her and my sister..and that lifts some of the burden from me for the time being. The sun is shining and Indian Summer is here. The warmth feels wonderful. Thank you hugss M |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I have no doubts to these feelings silken threaded, bound by trust, knotted in all the right places, pauses where needed, to catch the breath, slowing it down, to time it with yours. I never doubted for a minute that you wouldn't catch your breath! It just takes some patience to breathe easy again. You are a painted lady indeed, and always beautiful in whatever color you choose. Lookin' good on ya Maur~ |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
I am a painted lady today, rainbowed and in the pink, Victorian in style, just the way I "wish to be scene". the drama, the drama,,,love it, live it !!!!!! |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
"cut!" beautiful lady, no more acting, this is beauty for real! as are all your words. Jason |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
painted lady...me thinks of Renoir's garden ladies..enjoy the 'stately' visits, now and always  Martin [This message has been edited by wordwizard (10-09-2003 11:25 PM).] |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
cool ending I really enjoyed it |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
nice to be scene...just don't be herd! very innovative play on words, Maureen  |
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