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Dressed Down to Please |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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~*~ Impeccable, in faded blue jeans dashing in your demeanor and neatly pressed the way you floss and gloss it over suiting your mood, parted to one side. Your humor offset by the smile in your eyes enduring and alluring to come a little closer precise in your method of operation dressed down to please. Consoling yourself,that you gave fair warning a bend in the curve,but don't let it throw you there isn't more than you're seeing just fallow my lead. Don't allow yourself to dream in make believe take your time to absorb it all blot me off your lips and look away deny your part, and carve out a notch. Like it or not, I've got your number tattered around the edge torn from the turning over and over I've played out my hand and my heart has withdrawn, for keeping. ~*~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh...the last few lines of this just literally grabbed me with their power!! This is excellent, and I'm going back for another helping...~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~ [This message has been edited by Sunnyone (10-09-2003 12:57 AM).] |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
Agreeing with Sunny here...and? if the strength that flows from your pen also runs in your veins, then there's no safer place for a heart to be. [This message has been edited by Edder (10-09-2003 01:19 AM).] |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This is truly amazing as you are my friend.The strength in this is wonderfula dn I know the same comes from your heart.  Crystal |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Impeccable, in faded blue jeans dashing in your demeanor and neatly pressed the way you floss and gloss it over ,..........lololol cool, u got it girlie!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Bluesy, I admire how honest you are with your feelings. That really says a lot! So hey, throw in your ante and tell them to deal you back in. There's always another hand to be played. I’m sure that king of hearts you need to make a royal flush, is just around the corner... Great One Blusey Woozy...lol |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
uhuh....very pleasing. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Love the settled feel in this wonderful write Ms Blues. Well Done. Maree fate is not just |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Don't allow yourself to dream in make believe take your time to absorb it all blot me off your lips and look away deny your part, and carve out a notch. Like it or not, I've got your number tattered around the edge torn from the turning over and over I've played out my hand and my heart has withdrawn, for keeping. Lori, sounds like you've got it all under control....that is very good!!! Oh, and I sure do like "Bluesy-Woozy", too! LOL  Hugs  Ethel |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Good thing I'm always in your favor or I could sure read into this.  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL at the last reader's reply. Lori. you emote with intensity and open honesty that captures the heart and mind at the same time. I love to read your emotes. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Sunnyone~ That was awful nice of you. Thanks. Edder~ It's just a front, truth is, I'm a wimp! You are much to kind and I thank you for that. Crystal~ I don't know any other way than to write from my heart, Doesn't mean it always works in my favor! Hugs and thank you. Girlielocks~ You not only inspire me, you keep my head above sea level! Lolo, I don't care what they say, blonde is good!! Richy~. Have no fear I've got an ace up my sleeve! Thank you for the warm fuzzies, you have no idea what your replies mean to me! dertah~ uh huh, glad to hear my poem pleased you, and I thank you for telling me so. Hello Maree~ Oh I know I can get all worked up over nothing, but it doesn't take me long to settle down and see things for what they are. Hugs, you~ Ethel Dear~ Under control, who me? I will survive, come hell or high water, but I know that you know it's not easy. Thank you so much! Hey I'm just playing by the rules Duncan, don't read into it! (too much) Thank you for paying me a favor, does my heart good to see you here. Too intense perhaps, but I like her that way. Thank you Kacy~ |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
The only answer to this one is...a little sigh. I want to say the word sadness, but that's not it...we need a new word for the feeling you show so well. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I agree with Ratleader... this one gets a sigh. *S* For this has sense of strength... knowledge of your own worth... the sad being that it wasn't appreciated. *S* |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lori...You dress in spirit strength...it is beautiful! |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
very powerful, yet sometimes it does slap us in the face and we come back for more, good for you, even though I know it's far from easy. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you Ed~ You're right, but there are no tears in the end. (now that I'm over it) Suthern~ Some things just aren't meant to be....sigh~ Thank you very much for reading, hugs Ruth~ Spirit strength...that is a lovely thought, thank you Martie. Hello Rosebud~ No, it's not easy, but I knew that going in. Thank you for your caring reply. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Cut it all down to size and you look even stronger, as you are a phenominal woman, naturally, phenominal woman, that's you! (giggles) This is beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
strong write from a strong lady |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Blues, this has real power.. wonderful. |
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