Open Poetry #29 |
streaks |
Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
small eyes cast shadows on your wall watch it to close and you will miss it miss me dancing in the streets in front of your house while it rains outside somehow i am smiling through it you've forgotten everything you've seen now you hope to see as i do to not the same me through different eyes shaking my head i sit down middle of the highway on the busiest waiting for you to laugh me out of your life you don't smiling i thank you and walk away your hand is missing from inside mine it wasn't there in life but dreams held it true now i know someday soon we will be closer than ever until then i'll sit outside staring into the sun * the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes * |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so beautiful. I loved it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Riley, this is beautifully sad, sweet friend, I hope everything is alright as you have such a golden heart that doesn't deserve tears and heartache! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is beautifully heartfelt, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Riley, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This is very good. Crystal |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
loner- thanks for replying i am so glad you loved it noah- i cannot thank you enough for your sweet words....ahhh life as a teen is so cruel sometimes is it not? angelblueeyes- thank you so much for replying **love** ri * the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes * |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
A clever burn here, Ri. .m. |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
well lippity stick licks, jolly frollies, and purple dillies. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
riley girl!!!! I missed you stupid this is absolutely...library material.... don't run off again or I'll hunt YOU down. neener neener neener And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
bsquirrel- thanks a lot...means more than i could say de- shank ya muchly :P liz- whats upppp! omg i haven't talked to you in forever....thanks a ton for replyin to lil old me * the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes * |
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