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Stormy Weather |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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It’s the mark of winds to blow rainy tempests in our paths. Circulating this blue sphere, gathering up speed and strength no bulwark could hope to stay. Within these shadowy days, clouds make an oppressive mist - foggy thoughts caught in time’s bend, dark disciplines born again, wild to cause the sun to stray. With thunder herds overhead, we’re swept into a black sea, a surge of turbulent scenes - loathed pasts, hints of horrors flashed, blistered postcards in the fray. Season’s storms do come to pass, leaving behind our wreckage - blood was spilt once, now again. It’s the beacons we follow that light us along the way. [This message has been edited by Corinne (09-22-2003 06:32 PM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
Season’s storms do come to pass, leaving behind our wreckage. very impressive lines,, enjoyed the write n read,,, |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Very very nice, Cor Well said! Ed |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah... I see you feel a bit more than casual interest about this.. nicely done Cor... as usual... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Stormy weather, although challenging at times, can be exhilarating--and cathartic. A lovely write, Dear Cor.  EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Corinne A stormy read but well done. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) It is true that we will all encounter storms along lifes path, but He also promises that each storm will pass and will be interluded with breaks of sunshine and rainbow spells so many times to make our souls shine! (sigh) This is a most poignant read, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Corinne, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Beautifully said, Corinne. I enjoyed this. Hugs, ~Vicky When the power of love overcomes the |
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n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
I loved it from it's head down to its' toes! You provide quite vivid imagery. My fave: 'With thunder herds overhead, we’re swept into a black sea, a surge of turbulent scenes - loathed pasts, hints of horrors flashed, blistered postcards in the fray." Wow, I have a few blistered postcards in my album. Wonderul - Peace, Joe from the big MT |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
It’s the beacons we follow that light us along the way. Another excellent write, Corrine. I do love your writing.  |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Aye, new lights we need, or to blow out some of the old ones at least -- better darkness than the light they give. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Corinne - I like your thoughts in this write, at times I wonder where my beacon has gone... BC |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Cor- i loved how you wove this together- this was truly wonderful! take care.a Amy  "love is like a butterfly-- |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Glad I peeked around and found this piece. Of course I won't be sailing any more storms till the spring thaw up here. Nice write Sweet poet. Park |
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