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Alwye

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In the space between moments

0 posted 2003-10-08 05:19 PM

An Autumn Dream

I walk with you
Beneath chrysoprase leaves
Just beginning
To tinge with amber

The autumn day
Pulls twilight around its shoulders
A mimicry
Of your arms around me

The rustling of trees
Stills for a moment
As we close the space
Between us
Lips brushing lips
Silhouettes melting together
As the shadows grow deep

The golden grass
Entwines with my hair
While your tender hands
Traverse my skin

…Only the night watches…

We remain together
Soul pressed to soul
Until the first hint of morning
Finds us dew kissed.

Much love to all of you, I know I haven't been around much.I hope you're all well.

*Krista Knutson*

"If we have no peace, it is because we've forgotten that we belong to each other." ~Mother Teresa

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2003-10-08 05:23 PM

Krista~
How wonderful to see you !

This is a beautiful writing~
So delicately laced with loving thoughts~

Don't stay gone too long~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

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2 posted 2003-10-08 05:26 PM

Krista! nice to see you honey. Thanks for sharing this beautiful tender poem....

my favourite line....

Only the night watches

Yes!

Wonderful.

hope to see you around honey.

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

PsychoticBunni
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since 2003-10-03

Posts 162
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3 posted 2003-10-08 06:04 PM

wow. sounds like ur in luv. lucky girl. well shout iut how you feel over the mountaintops!!! i know i would. and if ur not then just disregard this whole message. lol.

Meg-cheauvanistsshould be tortured mercilessly by being tied to a mast and listening to Sirens singing their sexual song

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-10-08 06:30 PM

Welcome home dear! As always, you make me grab for my dictionary...which is a very good thing!

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2003-10-08 06:33 PM

Krista! Good to see you...you've been missed.

This is an absolutely beautiful write, my friend.

Hugs,
~Vicky
When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

Martie

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6 posted 2003-10-08 06:35 PM

Hi Krista...Imagery laced with emotive power...loved it!

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2003-10-08 06:47 PM

Hi, stranger! Enjoyed your poem very much! What was curious is that I just bought the most beautiful piece of chrysoprase and then I see that you used the word in your poem!

EA

angelblueyes
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8 posted 2003-10-08 06:49 PM

This was beautiful and truly from the heart.

Crystal

Alwye

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In the space between moments

9 posted 2003-10-08 09:00 PM

Hey everyone! The ghost alwye has returned! I've missed you all! Life has been so hectic lately. Yeah, I've got the love bug pretty bad...new guy and it's at that new stage where he's all you think about...anyways, thank you for all the wonderful comments, I appreciate it as always. I'm going to try hard to pop in a little more often.

*Krista Knutson*

"If we have no peace, it is because we've forgotten that we belong to each other." ~Mother Teresa

Mistletoe Angel

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10 posted 2003-10-08 10:57 PM

(smiles) And ain't this one chalcedony of a poem, sweet friend, you make autumn more than just chrysoprase but amber, rose quartz, and so much more with your poetry! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krista, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

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Florida, USA

11 posted 2003-10-08 11:11 PM

We remain together
Soul pressed to soul
Until the first hint of morning
Finds us dew kissed.

What a beautiful love poem this is!!
Isn't it grand to be in love?

Hugs

Ethel

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