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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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In my mind's eye, I become small in your touch ~ waiflike, a spirit, a wisp blending into your arms your breath your kiss I am delicate, fragile protected loved I become an exotic bloom blossoming |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
AH...the sun always makes the blooms that much brighter... lovely lady...just lovely... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Lovely lady, lovely words.  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"blending into your arms your breath your kiss I am delicate, fragile protected loved" Yes, yes, yes!! I want what she is having!!! Susan |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Karilea, what a beautiful blossom this is.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahhh, Sissie, and what a garden that would make...very gentle smile...lovely this is |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
Ohh, you write this so well! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I do, so very well, identify with your artistic oriental expressions of love and being loved...  Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is pure poetry! Love this keeper! ~Hugs YOU!~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I become an exotic bloom blossoming Yes you do and you are beautiful  Love this Sunshinygirl M fate is not just |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Love this...how beautiful the feel of your words, Karilea. Patricia |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
OOOh goosebumps! This was gorgeously sensual Karilea. like the beginnings of love, yet also, the security of long term love. library! ~I wanna live, I wanna give, I've been a miner for a heart of gold~ Neil Young |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Okay that was perfect! Beautifully sweet. It really touched me. Good one Sunshine. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
This is exquisite!!! To know that feeling and pen it so beautifully.... this is the feeling I adore, like I am being handled like I would break, like a fragile bloom... you unlocked my heart and looked inside for this one. Well Done!!! Sherry Cherish the good memories of the past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. But above all... be kind to yourself today. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Karilea, this is lovely, sweet friend, upon your palette you truly have a recognition and admiration for arts of all kinds and you make so much more bloom! (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
that all bud and bloom with such love,my friend... jwesley... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea...The strength is in the simple line and a few well chosen blossoms/words. Beautiful! |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Oh wow.. this is lovely.. |
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sea_of_okc Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568Oklahoma City, OK, USA |
 I'll take a dozen of you... my garden is in need of such beauty! |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
i became small in this poem for i could not express anything so...pure |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat what a touch can do, ey? beautiful write |
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