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Downpour
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Downpour |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Downpour In the downpour of the rain Salient history in its awe Beats the ancient kiss arcane Wrapping on my windows door Shattering my shallow sleep Placing phantoms in my mind Bringing me to thoughtful reap Charging down the road of blind. It drums a pulse of quicken fear Rattles me and shakes my bones A sound that brings the night to near Full of midnight undertones Washing down the grime of day Hides the mystic moon from view Streaks the windows with its gray Queers me in a mental rue Hypnotized I watch the flow Wishing that it turned to snow. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (10-08-2003 07:29 AM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Love eventually prevails my friend, always and so deserving. Love to you and yours... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ   |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Beats the ancient kiss arcane ============================== *smiling at you* loving the way you play with words... your vocab is too cool for school. (salient is one of my fave poetic words) I'm not wishing for snow... I'd rather your rhymes rain down on me  *ww*  "Nature's first green is gold, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Than so it shall be. WWRS |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Goooood mooooorning, my Dear Mr. Tumbleweed! ~ A brilliant write. So many levels of meaning and interpretation. Think snow, and it shall be so. The moon will shine brightly at night and pristine moments shall not be washed away. Enjoy the peace and purity of crystal clear freshness and light. Snooooow forevermore.  Angel hugs and kisses, EA |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Sy, much enjoyed this morning's write.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Don't know what's prettier... a lovely rain, or a beautiful snow... Thank you Sy...you've opened the doors to the on-coming winter with style, and grace... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Well you write like an Angel. LOL scorpio Enjoyed your reply. Sunshine THe shine and grace is yours. |
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