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Open Poetry #29
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Ku'uipo
Junior Member
since 2003-09-25
Posts 42
0 posted 2003-10-08 06:29 AM


give me strength to fight my fate
let my timid spirit sing
sprout me wings and let me fly
let my silent spirit ring

free me from the fear i hold
let my feeble spirit soar
unblind my eyes and let me see
let my wistful spirit roar

give me hope and bring faith near
do not let my spirit cry
i want to find my way back home
do not let my spirit die
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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
1 posted 2003-10-08 08:09 AM

I think this is beautiful, and something we should all print out, place on our refigerators and recite each and everyday.  Stunning display of a humble loving heart.  
Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
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2 posted 2003-10-08 08:39 AM

You are not "Losing Sight", for you truly do see. It is a matter of replacing your fears with love for your beautiful self. You then will not only be seeing the way to happiness,  you will be doing that which you need to do to bring the joy back into your life. This was a touching and beautiful piece of writing.


EA
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