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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-10-08 02:23 AM

In Your Pulse Of Salt

oh who
art thou
that lingers
upon me
from passion’s
song played in
sweetest lullaby

liquid notes tenderly
written from
tidal breath of
winds north blown
in your sighs
of lucid whispers

they beckon me
as I unknowingly
touch your name
in sand
creased under
my own skin

totally immersed
from an
ocean of thirst
that salt pumps
from a heart and
my lips touch
the taste
of excitement
and I drink
you in

do not let
me be denied
in these waves
of the edge
as I swim
your pulse

"wish your room had room for two" John Mayer

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

1 posted 2003-10-08 09:41 AM

This is beautiful.

Thank you for sharing it.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2003-10-08 09:49 AM

"my lips touch
the taste
of excitement
and I drink
you in"

Those lines...so sensual..

Susan

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2003-10-08 10:13 AM

OneSaltSlick~
This is about as pretty a piece as I've ever read~
A poetess of gentle awakening ... just lovely~
*sigh*
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2003-10-08 06:04 PM

Helen..

"as I swim
your pulse"

Lovely writing!

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

5 posted 2003-10-08 06:20 PM

Helen...I have read your poems for over a year now and have watched you awaken your inner feelings to share with us here at Passions and I for one thank you for that.
Your words are so gentle and come from your heart. Enjoyed this very much...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

6 posted 2003-10-08 06:50 PM

Pretty, very very pretty, i like the touch of this

Love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy

Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

7 posted 2003-10-08 06:53 PM

This is beautiful.You are one of my favorites to read, for I always knows there's a true piece of you in each write.

Crystal

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

8 posted 2003-10-08 07:15 PM

some very lovely lines in this Helen
little parts of you for us to share...thank you.

NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

9 posted 2003-10-08 08:47 PM

Lady Helen, this is just so soft and sensual and as lovely as a Spring breeze blowing across a Cape Cod beach!

You are such an amazing writing and I love reading your poems. I may have told you that before but if I did it's okay cause one can never have enough affirmation and praise.

Hugs, Marti

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

10 posted 2003-10-08 10:11 PM

Poetry doesn't get better than this...and this one has a new feel to it, an air I haven't seen in you before.

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Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

11 posted 2003-10-08 10:15 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is lovely, sweet friend, you always write such comforting and lovely poetry that is enjoyable to read! (kiss on cheek) Your songs are honey for the bloodstream, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

12 posted 2003-10-08 11:02 PM

Helen: I enjoyed this so much. Very well written.

Betty Lou Hebert

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

13 posted 2003-10-09 08:35 AM

Oh my..this is breathtaking!
Lovely lovely lady.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

14 posted 2003-10-09 10:09 AM

You never disappoint... you just excel. *S* This is absolutely beautiful!

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

15 posted 2003-10-09 10:21 AM

"liquid notes tenderly
written from
tidal breath of
winds north blown
in your sighs
of lucid whispers

they beckon me
as I unknowingly
touch your name
in sand
creased under
my own skin"

WOW
I love this part.....
completely fantastic!!!!

I am keeping this one for sure

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

16 posted 2003-10-09 03:47 PM

Very beautiful poetry!
Love, Margherita

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

17 posted 2003-10-09 04:36 PM

I’m speechless, this is amazing, Wow!

I’m in In Awe Helen!

Richy

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

18 posted 2003-10-10 03:44 AM

I see your salt retains its flavour.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

19 posted 2003-10-10 03:53 AM

I admit. it's beautiful and more

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

20 posted 2003-10-10 04:27 AM

Oh god, I can't breathe now..

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

21 posted 2003-10-10 04:30 AM

very nice

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

alisa
Member

since 2003-08-20

Posts 70
Florida

22 posted 2003-10-10 01:18 PM

wonderful,just wonderful...

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