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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri 
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Green Crayons She ‘magines her sisters seated ‘round table of finest monogrammed linens as Elegant speak chimes amidst polished silver and delicate French porcelain In tongue tie, she attempts to retrieve her fallen napkin, unseen by matrons of refine For ‘tis a graceful knee bend that has always escaped her curtsy Remaining ever an onlooker with her chipped mug of joe and words never finding concerto flow Still hopeful, Her eyes aglow With someday sparkle, A twinkling of fairy Godmother’s wand, a sprinkling of enchanted talc shall some eve transform this Cinderella’s rags to riches. Until then... She listens, listens to her sisters’ plumes etching prophetic wisdoms upon antique parchment While she, with green crayon and scratch paper, eeks out her heart |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What'cha doing in my shoes???  You've spoken well of the insecure ones who hear the chatter about them, unsure when to wedge in a word amid the tight chatter of those who glow... while our own words nestle deep within, just waiting a release, and finally, when it pours...it comes with thunder... and green crayons...  I am Very Proud of You! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I was just pondering today how I enjoy the moments of creating a poem, while others seem to enjoy madly mundane satisfactions ... Wonderfully written. Your green crayons are exceptional companions for your poetic journeys. Love, Margherita  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Patricia~ This is poetess-in-growth~ Really good dear lady~ You have crayoned these thoughts so beautifully~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You are growing nicely my friend. Continue, color the paper.. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Good God Patricia . . . yes . . . little do they know she has a rainbow of colors while they have none Beautifully penned xxoo |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
We transform through words. Cinderella had to wait for a wand to do the magic. Your writing creates your own. I loved this! More than words could say.  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
the world as touched through green coloured crayons...and other colors too  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
You have left me speechless Patricia. This is a very beautiful write. Maree oh it's a  fate is not just |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
She listens, listens to her sisters’ "plumes etching prophetic wisdoms upon antique parchment While she, with green crayon and scratch paper, eeks out her heart" ~ I do believe you are a poetess, Dear Patricia!--and a fine one at that!  EA |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
beautifully penned poetry,,, |
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