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Light meeting Light
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Light meeting Light |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 Light meeting Light I danced tonight in the arms of Light. Called forth by my longing you settled in my eyes, I guided you to fall deeper into me, you crossed my heart and joined my song, falling deeper and deeper along the waves of my breath. Swinging full circle on strings of light, we called into existence new lands and riding the secret route of our desire we collided at heaven’s gate. Swallowed by the Light, blind, we bared our essence to each other and merged in purity unknown, transforming into one single shining glow. I danced tonight in the arms of Light. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Margherita...how I enjoyed this. I read through the nuances and enjoyed the light you sparked into many, many thoughts of where this could go, and why...one would want to take it there. This, my dear, is lovely... and it IS a  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very touching |
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MoniDaPoet Member
since 2003-08-14
Posts 73California, USA |
Perfectly beautiful! This is so visual and filled with grace. This is the reason I love humanity and the written word. You surely made my day! I have only my genius to declare! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Margherita . . . you are the Light . . . we bared our essence to each other and merged in purity unknown, Beautiful perfect lines xxoo |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
I danced tonight in the arms of Light. beautiful, if only to stay there for a bit longer |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
I danced tonight in the arms of Light. Absolutely fantastic line and I loved this poem to so much. I didn't want it to end. Hugs, Marti |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
P.S. The graphic is beautiful!! |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
beautifully penned,,,with romance in the moon lite,, |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
So nice...  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
What a beautiful picture you painted in my mind. Oh, I hope it has rained there, has it? I have all the older folks in my prayers, so sad. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Trip the light fandangle---may you dance in the arms of light forevermore!  A delightful read!  EA |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Swallowed by the Light, blind, we bared our essence to each other and merged in purity unknown, transforming into one single shining glow. I danced tonight in the arms of Light. I close my eyes in savor of the image of this poem. This is incredible in so many ways. Me thinks I must keep this one in me library! Patricia |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you my dear Poet friends, you have touched me with your loving comments. Dear Sharon, no, rain has not yet come! It's really getting critical. We hope and pray! Meanwhile dissolving .... Love and hugs. Margherita PS I'm on holidays next week and will be back in September. Wishing you a wonderful summertime, full of inspiring moments! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Simply stunning Margherita. You know beauty...as few ever do. Love, Eric |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Margherita, this is one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read. I'm going to keep thisd, Lady.  Hugs Ethel |
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