Open Poetry #28 |
jesus |
RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
Daylight vanished Night time lurked behind Stars dotted into sight Pearly gates opened wide Angels hurried by Carried a child With the blood of god Down to earth below This child to walk the streets Touch the poor Feed the weak Give life to those who weep Given to a mother In a barn in the night Three holy man Holding presents For this child of peace A star shone bright Outside this barn This light That brought many from all around The child named “Jesus” Grew very old and wise And gave happiness to those in pain Then carried a cross up a hill Nailed to this wood With a throne worn crown Died slowly in front of all Now buried in a tomb Came back to life On the day he said Now he walked the earth again Given peace to all that believed… |
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Poe_Pot_Pie Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 107Canada |
Well, that was a nice peace. I hope you have faith and arn't just writing about some "tale". Rock on! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Great to see you back! If you believe and this is written from your belief...it is great!!! ~Thanks ARH |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this... Reminds me of a song...Jesus, name above all names, blessed redeemer, living word, Emanual, God is with us, blessed redeemer, living God...James |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Good spiritual writing...thanks for the words.. Goldenrose. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I enjoyed reading your poem. Jesus IS alive and comforts those who believe. Love, Margherita |
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