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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Close my eyes, lift myself out Seeing what is beyond my body Luminous sky with many clouds Golden moon, guiding light Featherweight clouds drift by Pizazz of the stars takes me high Green, rolling, luscious hills Farther than I can see Air, easy to breathe Like a beautiful dream Waves crashing Making an enchanted melody Wind whispering words of a lullaby Golden embers of sand Floating smooth as a Gatia Immense tranquility in this world So peaceful, so full of life angelblueyes |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
beautifully thought n penned,, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
QJQ:Thanks  James:Thank you  angelblueyes |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Immense tranquility in this world So peaceful, so full of life summed it up well...each line a beauty *s M |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Your images flow beautifully upon the page...I so enjoyed this. Patricia |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Maureen:Thak you Patricia:Thnaks my friend.Glad you enjoyed angelblueyes |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Sounds like a most beautifully successful astral projection... -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Angel, this is really pretty. It has a peaceful feeling to it.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Very lovely....very peaceful.... Greeneyes~ The way you move me |
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