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Being alone |
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Lone Star New Member
since 2003-08-15
Posts 6Iowa |
LONE STAR It was dawn, barely light. A single bird chirped, The moon was not quite full, but still very bright in the early morning dawn. She sat and watched the only star left shining as the sky lightened in the east. Lone star Just like her. No others close to it, Just like her. But Is that true? Surely that isn’t the only star in the sky. Surely there are other’s just not shining so bright. That star is not alone in the sky. She is not alone. Just today she feels like that lone star in the sky. Tomorrow, if she looks, and it probably won’t take much She will see more stars, closer than she thought. So Maybe she really is like That Lone Star in the sky. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Lone Star, welcome to Passions In Poetry. I really did enjoy your poem. I'm sure you're going to like it here. Just settle in and read and write.  Ethel....garysgirl [This message has been edited by garysgirl (08-15-2003 10:40 AM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
That star is not alone in the sky. She is not alone. Just today she feels like that lone star in the sky. We can't always help our feelings... nor should we have to justify them, even if they are just for today. I can relate so well... Thank you and welcome~ |
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