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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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~*~ I am unsure what it's all about the rum or the wine mixed with feeling. Combined with the swing, changing the mood squeezing a twist in the twilight. Like goldenrod bends in the sway or a kiss that lingers at sunset rocking back and forth in slow motion where my heart wants to stay and play favorites. ~*~ |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so beautiful. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh this is beautifully romantic  Love it Ms Blues Maree |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I'm glad you both stopped by to share the romance. It's not all that, but it could be! Thanks so much, Julie and Maree~ |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
romantically penned,,, |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Wonderful. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lori Sounds a bit intoxicating.  |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Lori, I like this a lot!!  Hugs Ethel (Psssttt..rum and coke with a twist of lime was my favorite drink foryears....... until I quit drinking. I liked it so much that I still think of it sometimes after 20 years.) |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ummm...Am I the only one took it as you were playing favorites with the rum, and the wine? Or was that whine  whatever it was, soon numbness would set in and you would forget your blues, bluesy. Nice write though, but I suggest milk and cookies. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Do rum and wine mix...this reminds me of when I was a young man in the Army in Europe and one evening in the bars I mixed almost every drink possible...later in the cab when the driver pulled off a little too fast...it took its toll. James |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
You're too cute bluesy...  Could I get a couple aspirin ya think???? |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Bluesy, Beautiful... Doesn't playing favorites imply a choice? Okay I will stop thinking too much...I feel a write coming on.. Love the new picture!!! Susan |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
nice to see you writing happy *s M |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Favorites are always healing. I love this rhythm, the music has imprinted it perfectly. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Why thank you QJ Good to see you here Kaoru, thanks for the wonderful! Martie~ Yea I was just a little dizzy! Ethel~ Thank you for reading and for liking this. Hey, you could be the designated driver! Hugs~ Mysteria~ Wine is my weakness, what can I say!! (not whine, well maybe sometimes) Thank you! James~ Thanks for sharing that, what a price to pay eh? What's the problem Duncan, got a headache? You poor baby..... (insert curlers) Hi Susan~ Exactly! Better yet, it's a choice I can live with. Thanks so much. vandana~ You're sweet, and I do appreciate you. Hi M~ Change is good, considering my options. Thanks for being here. hugs~ Margherita~ What a nice reply....thank you for that! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Like goldenrod bends in the sway or a kiss that lingers at sunset rocking back and forth in slow motion where my heart wants to stay like the caribbean flavor to it all, make mine a double and send in the palm trees |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BluesSerenade~ 'a kiss that lingers at sunset rocking back and forth in slow motion where my heart wants to stay and play favorites.' This has BEAUTIFUL written all over it~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Liked the way you created this bubbly feeling...good job Bluesy. TD |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Look how beautiful you are! I LOVE the new picture..... and this write is so lovely hon....I've missed a lot lately (something about life )I know you know.....keep the smile, it looks wonderful on you and warms the heart.... HUGSSSSS L~ The way you move me |
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