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Ignorance Is Bliss..
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Ignorance Is Bliss.. |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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The laughter of children peices the silence i look up momentarily from my book too see two 9 yr old girls giggiling as they whisper to each other i shake my head all i wanted was a nice bus ride a queit bus ride these girls, so full of life, interupted that i envy them i envy their ignorance i guess its really true ignorance is bliss if only they knew if only they knew how much pain the world was in how much suffering there is but they dont so they'll just play on happy carefree i guess it really is true ignorance is bliss... |
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MoniDaPoet Member
since 2003-08-14
Posts 73California, USA |
I like the feelings you're expressing in the poem. I only suggest you correct the grammar and spelling. And perhaps increasing your vocabulary would enhance your work. You have a good view of the world and youself. Keep writing. I have only my genius to declare! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I think true bliss is when we KNOW but we still can find serenity and joy of life within our hearts. Laughter is healing. Your poem paints a very vivid scene. Love, Margherita |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Don't spoil it for them just yet!! It's a timely process indeed, and our innocense doesn't last long enough. |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
-sigh- i like this I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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