Open Poetry #28 |
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I must admit |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) ![]() |
I awake with the rising of the sun My focus is true Nervous and giddy Are the feelings that erupt No timid flare-up mind you But a long and loud barrage of thunder smashing And crashing high in the heavens As I realize the storm that draws near Is not in the sky But in my Heart and Soul Trying to break out and scream The words you await to hear But I ask that you please understand That this is no easy task It takes some spunk and nerve for me to admit The bottom line in this relationship The very essence of our core Begs that I rally my resolve And speak my thoughts I need not sensitivity But compassionate eyes And affectionate ears As I whisper What you want to hear I ask your forgiveness I beg your pardon Over my male ignorance I ask that you exonerate me of my stupidity And make amends with this fool Who is only silly and unquestionably In love with you even before the day that I said I DO! [This message has been edited by Thomas119gold (08-14-2003 12:57 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May all that you so poetically requested, be granted! ![]() ![]() EA |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
May all that you desire come true."squeeze: angelblueyes |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very touching and made me smile big |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I am always very touched when someone is able to ask to be forgiven! That's a wonderful quality and hopefully it will be granted to you. Beautiful. Love, Margherita ![]() |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh....this deserves to be read, my friend... up up you go! I loved this. |
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Janette![]()
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Ohhhhhhhh the wifey has got to love love love this piece cause it sure did make me sigh and say out loud ... Ahhhhhhhhh. Sweet read here. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
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