Open Poetry #28 |
Wordless Vacation |
Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Wordless Vacation My words have taken a vacation today. No blending in symphonic harmony. No loving song do I hear. No sweet words to caress my soul. No words of love do I hear. The colors are different shades of chilling black and sad filled gray. No soft chiffon's and cooling silk’s only rough wool's and colorless burlaps. No brilliant colors of enthralling saffron and eye catching chartreuse. No bright words of sunshine and melodic carousels. No rose or gardenia to grace my sight. No fragrances to fill my nostrils with earthy delights. Maybe if I travel to the sea, I will regain my lost words that have taken a vacation and in there haste to leave, they have forgotten to invite me. I sit here and listen to her soothing sound and turn my face into the wind to capture her cooling spray of healing mists and colorful rainbows. My spirit is drifting Drinking in the serenity, the tranquility as the words begin to flow into my relaxed state of mind. My words have returned, no longer on vacation. No longer hidden in the darkened corners of my questioning mind. Bonnie J. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The sea is full of wonder, and if I had it my way, there is no place I would rather be. I understand the feelings you write of, it's not always easy to find the words. Well said Bonnie~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Bonnie, your words blended into perfect "symphonic harmony". You have expressed very poetically what I, myself, have experienced at times. Linda |
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MoniDaPoet Member
since 2003-08-14
Posts 73California, USA |
I completely get what your saying. I feel very blessed with having read such a great poem. Write MORE! :-) I have only my genius to declare! |
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