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Redemption
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Redemption |
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MERCURY Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 190Ireland |
On the third day the fighting had finally stopped. The victors returned to higher ground, The fallen banished Hell-bound. Awaiting them was chaos and pandemonium. The vanquished arrived in total despair, Now they are to live their nightmare. Once, their name had envisaged awe and beauty. Now they are shadows of their former self, Redemption, no longer an option for thyself. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is very well written...but so sad.  Hugs  Ethel |
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ShadowRaven Member
since 2003-08-13
Posts 51 |
I really enjoyed this, well written. Nice flow and imagery. Very similar to the way a musician friend of mine works. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Like an opening monologue to a gripping film... -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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